The Importance of Narrative Drive
What makes a good story?
Writing teachers talk about a lot of things
- POV, tense, GMC (goals, motivation, conflict), the Three Act Structure, voice,
place - and each of those things is incredibly important to build the right
narrative drive for your story. If one of these isn’t spot on, then the
narrative drive isn’t right and the story falls down. Badly structured
narrative drive is more often than not responsible for manuscripts that meander
around but never get anywhere, or the saggy middle, or the end that fizzles.
What is narrative drive?
Writers often think narrative drive is the
same as structure - it’s not. Narrative drive is more than what makes up the
plot and how. It’s more than ‘add protagonist’s journey here’. It’s more than GMC
and the all-important Three Act Structure. Put all of these together, add voice
and you have narrative drive.
It took me some time to understand
narrative drive and all the elements that make it work. Now that my ninth
published book is about to be released in May (Blazing Fear), I feel that I
have come to understand it intimately.
All the work that goes into redrafting
and editing my novels is in service to narrative drive. It’s the thing that I
bang on about the most when doing assessments and what I teach when I’m
mentoring - teaching just about voice or conflict or structure individually isn’t
enough to make a book speak to readers. Of course, I teach all of those skills
because they are part of narrative drive!
How do I make my narrative drive work?
Narrative drive isn’t something that just
comes. An author must make choices for it to work. That doesn’t mean you have
to be a plotter - I’m not. I’m a pantser. But I still have to make choices at
some time to decide how to structure the conflicts to drive the protagonist’s
journey onward in a page turning way to a satisfying end. Some of those choices
come easily, some require many rewrites, but in the end, everything is in
service to the narrative drive. Making your narrative drive work is hard work,
but it is all so worth it in the end. Once you have it and understand it, it is
the key that will open the lock to a world of wonderful manuscripts full of the
stories you want to tell, and do so in a way that shines.
What do you do to ensure you continue to hone your writing
skills?
I love to love: Books that show me how to
be a better writer.
I love to learn: About narrative drive and
how to make it work better.
I love to laugh: With my writing friends as
we work through our mistakes and improve together.
