By Marilyn Forsyth
I recently faced the massive problem of having to cull my medieval/contemporary timeslip manuscript by 45K words. 😟 I’d spent over a year writing 140K words, only to be told by the two editors and an agent I pitched to at the RWA conference that it had to be cut to 90-95K words before sending it to them.
The good news is, I did it. (Yay me!)
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1. First, I looked at choices for removing huge chunks of the story. Could I take out whole chapters, whole subplots, whole point-of-view characters?
I found I was able to remove two chapters that, though fascinating from a historical point of view, were not strictly needed to move the plot forward.
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Did it hurt?
Like a punch to the heart!
I loved writing those chapters.
2. Next, I went scene by scene to decide if each one was really necessary. Did it up the stakes, or show character development, or move the story forward?
This was tough, but also enlightening. I changed a heap of scene beginnings to start at a later point (while still managing to keep the hooks 😇).
Did it hurt? Hell, yeah! I loved those scenes.
3. My next task was to examine the dialogue and introspection. Had I repeated conversations, thoughts and actions?
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Why, yes, I had...and way too many times.
I ended up cutting and/or combining a ton of each of these. And while I was at it, I noticed some descriptions of characters and settings were worded very similarly, so I did a search for keywords and either deleted or changed the descriptions (shortening them at the same time).
Did it hurt? Did it what! That dialogue was sparkling, those descriptions were captivating.😉
4. By this time, I was down to reduced to removing individual words. Yes, folks, that’s what it came down to.
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I’ve been writing long enough to know that really, very, just, that, and so are my favourite filler words, but a run through of each chapter on Autocrit brought up some other interesting overused words (eyes, hands, now - needless to say, more editing was required).
Did it hurt? Nope. Those fillers have no place in my writing.
I finally reached my goal of 95K words (after several months’ working on it) but, with all the deletions, I had to check that my plot points still occurred in the right place (to my delight - and amazement - they did), and then reread to make sure my story made sense. (I'm happy with it, but if there are any beta readers out there who’d like to offer their services, I'm up for honest feedback.😜)
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But let's get back to this post...
Wouldn’t it be great if culling was as simple as deleting words and leaving it at that? Unfortunately, it’s not. But what I’ve learned is that, after so many changes have been made, the most important thing is to ensure your story still hangs together. That there are no loose ends. That your story is still worth telling.
That the threads of your story weave a tale that is worthy of the reader, because that is what we all strive for.
Have you ever had to cull a story you loved writing? How did you go about it?
Love to Love the DIY writing retreat my crit partners and I undertook in February. The weather was pretty conducive to writing.
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Love to Laugh when reminiscing about the past. Had so much fun catching up with old school buddies last week!
Love to Learn the inspiration behind Beth O’Leary’s The Flat Share. You can watch her interview at https://myvlf.com/theatre-hall (click Watch Now when you get there). Myvlf is a fabulous website for authors and readers alike.
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